Score: 0

"HOW DID YOU DO"

submission: mario vs. bad guys

date: June 19, 2008

HOW DID YOU DO THIS ON MARIO BROS FOR SEGA GENESIS????!!!!!!!

Score: 10

"Best.Movie.Ever."

submission: Fantastic Dance Party

date: June 19, 2008

This is quite possibly the greatest movie of all time. Superb Art work and animation. The voice acting is phenomenal. And the best part is the plot which is super original. Overall better than fallen angel and bitty biken wood COMBINED XD
10/10

Score: 6

"well done"

submission: ```Clock Crew Fun```

date: February 12, 2007

Graphics-- Everything was pretty much well drawn. The characters needed a little bit more detail. The backgrounds needed some detail as well. Everything was drawn nice and the animation was good too.

Sound-- I liked the music throughout the flash. Everything was well suited and the timing for the music was good too.

Interactivity-- You didn't add a replay button, therefore 0 in this category.

Humor-- The "spam" message on the clock was funny. The penis was funny in a crude sort of way.

Overall-- It was ok for the most part. What I found most enjoyable about this is the music and the humor. Perhaps it's too short for the majority, but I thought the length was fine. Next time don't be such a lazy ass though.

2.5/5

Score: 5

"ok"

submission: Emi_KILLER---2

date: February 10, 2007

Your not too bad for only 14 years old. You seem to be decent in animating and your animations can be quite smooth at times. The stick figures seem to have creative personalities. You draw stick figures better than most people as well.

There are bad things about this flash, however. Most of the lip syncing in this is off. And for me its hard to hear what they are saying half of the time. The plot was hard to follow at first, but you kind of cleared it up at the end.

Overall I think you need to make some of the voices more clear and understandable. You also need to work on lip syncing. I thought this flash wasn't all that bad, even know I didn't know what the hell was going on at the beginning. Keep practicing, thats all I have to say.

2.5/5

Score: 6

"decent"

submission: Battle Royal Game

date: January 31, 2007

I'm not too found of flash's that lack main plot. But this was pretty good. The background was nice looking and the characters weren't drawn half bad either. However adding more detail to the character wouldn't hurt. Also the black outlines were way too thick.

Animation could have been better. It seemed like they were fighting too robotic like and not at a smooth pace. They moved more awkward than smooth.

The sound was OK, but you could have used a different track, to add to the "battle" theme. It was just too techno like for my taste.

I guess some people might find this entertaining, but I for one didn't. I see were you're going with the whole battle thing, but really you should add some plot. For instance, why are they fighting each other?

I would recommend some detailed carnage as well. This was just too time violence wise.

Some improvements would be to add some more detail into the character design, make some of the motions a tad more smooth and not robotic like, get rid of the huge black outlines, there just too distracting. Finally add some more carnage to this, such as blood, guts, weapons, etc.

3/5

Score: 6

"Not much of an improvement."

submission: Newground$ Tutorial 2

date: January 21, 2007

[Graphics]- Nothing different from the original, still the same gloomy colors. The menu now looks too cluttered with the extra buttons in all. You pictures are still pixelated. Make them more visible.

[Helpfulness]- Like your other one, it's pretty helpful. Your pretty frank when your telling the user whats up and how to do this.

[Information]- Pretty much the same material you covered in the original. Maybe add some BBS information and some "fun facts" about NG.

[Sound]- Same old music as the last one. You have managed to improve by adding an on and off button, but you should make them smaller because it clutters the main menu. Add some more tracks too.

[Overall]- Wasn't much of an improvement since your last one. To improve add colors based on the newgrounds layout, add some more tracks, increase the quality of your pictures, and make the main menu neater looking. I would be a good idea to add even more information, because the info in this is similar than your first one. The more the better.

2/5
~Review Request Club~
~Evan~

Score: 7

"Nice tutorial."

submission: Newground$ Tutorial

date: January 21, 2007

[Graphics]- The main background is pretty boring. Try to add a lot more colors in this to brighten it up. I suggest gray and orange since they are NG's primary colors. A lot of the pictures in here are quite hard to see because of the excessive pixels. Make it more clear to see the pictures.

[Helpfulness]- You seem to add some extra information such as a "dictionary". This tutorial has a lot of information and should be helpful to anyone new to this site, but the problem is a lot of people won't find this flash. There more likely to search in the Where is it? and How? forums. Your sentences are nice and clear and easy for anybody to understand. Overall this was more helpful than your average NG tutorial.

[Information]- You added extra information, even more than is needed, but knowledge is power! I think though you need to update your whistle info to the modern whistle standards.

[Sound]- The was well suited, but you need to add an "off" button and different tracks because the song could get annoying after a while.

[Overall]- Very nice and well thought out tutorial. It has a lot of extra information too. I'd say the only improvements you should add are make the picture more clear, add some different songs, and some more colorful backgrounds; I suggest gray and orange because they are newgrounds primary colors. Overall a nice and helpful tutorial.

3/5
~Review Request Club~
~Evan~

Score: 5

"Okay quiz but needs some improvements"

submission: Newground Quiz

date: January 21, 2007

[Graphics]- Some of the background colors were good at times, other times they got in the way with the text. The text at the top was interesting looking, but it doesn't have a Newgrounds feel to it. I think your idea of changing the back ground on each different question is a good idea because users could get bored looking at the same one. However I think the background colors should be solid overall.

[Questions]- The questions in this were pretty decent but some were just plain obvious, and some were not so obvious. Questions like "What movie had review crew pick on June 3, 2006" are just plain ridiculous. But you did start out with easy questions then as the questions went up so did the level of difficulty. I think you should have added some questions that are derived specifically from the newground FAQ and history of NG.

[Entertainment Value]- I found this quite boring. Mainly because the reward wasn't really a reward. Nothing to look forward to if you successfully finish the quiz. Next time add an actual award. I found some of the questions to be funny. Thats probably the only entertaining thing about this.

[Sound]- Music went well with this quiz. I think ParagonX9 is getting a little bit overused though. You also had an "on" and "off" button to this, which is a plus.

[Overall]- This quiz is pretty mediocre. There no real reward at the end, which basically gives you nothing to look forward to at the end. You should also add some more tracks to your next quiz. Add some backgrounds that don't interfere with the question text. Add some more questions that are relevant to the NG FAQ and Newground history. Maybe add some more BBS questions too. Overall very mediocre but with improvements it could be a well rounded quiz.

2/5
~Review Request Club~
~Evan~

Score: 3

"It was bad for the most part."

submission: VT - East Park

date: January 8, 2007

[Overview]- When I first started to watch this I thought it would be a half-decent parody or a spin-off. I was wrong. The flash revolves around four kids, obviously based off the south park kids. You did a good job on the characters, there pretty similar to the real thing, except for skin color and clothes. I had a hard time listening to the character because of the bad voice acting and high-pitch voice effects. But what I got from it was that one of you're character wanted to become an "illustrator" so he goes to school and eventually becomes rich at one point in time, then goes back to school again for some reason. As I said before the plot was hard to follow.

[Plot]- It seems like the plot was understandable. Kid wants to become an illustrator so he has to go to school for a degree. Some of the details in the plot was hard to follow. It seems like an average plot and story, but just make it easier to follow and understand whats happening.

[Entertainment Value]- This is the flashes downside. It was extremely boring mainly because of the length. Next time maybe shorten it to about three and a half minutes. Most of the flash consists of the characters moving around doing stuff, but the viewer isn't a hundred percent sure of what exactly they are doing. And when the talk there unusually high pitched voices as annoying as hell. I'd say the most entertaining part for me was the fancy car with hydraulics scene. Overall it was pretty boring.

[Graphics]- The four main characters were drawn quite well. However you need to give your environments more detail.

[Animation]- Bad beyond belief. The characters moved so choppily and robotic-like. Plus you seem to deify the laws of physics when one of the character jumps in mid-air, floats there, and does a 360 spin. And when the teacher handed him the degree it seemed to just float to his hand. Another thing is the bad lip-syncing. Sometimes the lips kept on moving when the character stopped talking. I'd say improve on this the most.

[Sound]- The music was very well fitted for what was going on in the story at the time. However the voice acting was atrocious. Sometimes the seemed to talk so monotonic it wasn't even funny. Plus the voices were just way too high pitched.

[Overall]- SP fans might find this somewhat enjoyable. I myself found this to be so bad at times it was funny. But I think to make it more interesting and an overall better flash you should Improve on animation by making it more realistic, also improve on lip-syncing. You should scratch the whole high-pitch voice idea and just get different people to voice act in there very own voice. You should also shorten it some; you could do this be just getting to the point of the plot without and sub-plots. Overall it looks promising if all you do is improve on what I have listed.

1.5/5
~Evan~

*Review Request*

Score: 6

"pretty good action flash"

submission: Nightmare Vs. Scythe

date: December 29, 2006

[Overview]- You seem to have some neat characters in this flash, even though some are slightly cliché, such as the giant robot. The flash is about two guys called scythe and nightmare. I don't know who's who because they were never introduced specifically. Anyway the fight and eventually the big robot guy is killed and more robot guys come probaly to finish the fight with the skinny guy who I'm guessing is scythe. It ends with the dead robot smiling an evil smile.

[Plot]- No real plot here, just two monster like things fighting. It kind of ends in a way boring way with no real climax.

[Entertainment Value]- If you like fighting things, then good, this is for you.

[Graphics] Nothing really detailed, but they were uniquely drawn with great use of the color red.

[Animation]- This is a category that you might want to improve on. The characters motion were quite choppy and not fluent. Improvement is needed.

[Sound]- Had some nice fighting music, it was very well fit. You could have used some more sound effects like grunts for instance.

[Overall]- Nice action flick. Although it's not perfect it was entertaining to some extent. In you're next flash you might want to add a deeper plot, for instance, why these characters are fighting? In also introduce them to the viewer. You might would also like to add a background like a city of some sort. Improvement on the animation would be a plus too.

2.5/5

~Evan~