OK
PROS: The graphics and character design were drawn real well. It was really detailed. I also like how you made the bullet 3-D.
CONS: Instead of using speaktopia you used you're own voice. This is good in an original way, but were all used to listening to speaktopia. Some casual viewers might find a talking pear delivering thanks to the glock group boring.
OVERALL: Great animation and character design, but as a flash it just lack any plot or story for that matter, what so ever.
2.5/5
ENJOYABLE
PROS: You're flash was overall very well animated. The main screen and pre-loader were very simple looking, but nice and smooth looking as well. It also has some nice blood effects too.
CONS: Well the movie really doesn't fit well with the title. There was barely any break dancing at all. The flash also ended way too soon.
OVERALL: It was enjoyable to watch the amazing animation in action. However this flash desperately needs length.
3.5/5
LOOKS GOOD
PROS: Great use of colors in this flash. Te backgrounds were interesting looking, sort of futuristic. The character design is pretty unique and creative looking. This flash has some good running animations in it also.
CONS: The voice is hard to understand, plus it is also annoying. I would say a MAJOR con would be the fact that it is not finished. Please finish it before submitting it to the portal.
OVERALL: It looked like a promising flash at first but you cut short. Too bad though.
2.5/5
POOR
PROS: The idea of making flash movies based on events of you're life seems original and unique.
CONS: The sound was scratchy and annoying. It was a pretty boring story with little action at all. The character were just plain awful looking.
OVERALL: Maybe you can voice act for your movie next time. In all original idea but it was just plain bad overall. To make it better I suggest add detailed characters, voice act for them, and add some backgrounds.
1.5/5
NEAT FLASH BUT CONFUSING
PROS: I loved the raven. It was perfectly drawn. From the looks of it you gave him sort of a mysterious look too. The city background was also drawn well. Overall the graphics and animation in this flash were definitely the highlights.
CONS: The plot was very hard to follow. Not to mention it ended very abruptly with out anything happening in the first place. So I'm assuming the main character had a double-dream? I'm not sure.
OVERALL: You're character design is quite mysterious and original. The animation on that guys hand was creepy yet smooth to watch.
Overall if you had a good story going on with the raven and this dreaming fellow I would definitely rate it higher, but since it was hard to follow I didn't do so.
2.5/5
NOT SO GOOD
PROS: The music fit the mood. Sort of a tough guy beat going on with that song which fitted for the guy with the gun.
CONS: Well it ends abruptly and it goes to this weird green screen. The animation is very sloppy and crude. The dialog is cheesy and just plain dumb. There wasn't any plot.
OVERALL: I think it is a mediocre CS flash that is essentially plot less and random. I think you should make a CS story with an actual plot and also improve on the animation.
2/5
KIND OF FUNNY
PROS: The pre-loader music is great and kind of sets a funky mood to it. The text was humorous at times.
CONS: Well there was really nothing going on here, which is kind of boring with no character movement in all.
OVERALL: It is a creative flash trying to test our patience while some funky music is playing. The only actual movement in this is the text and the loading bar. Pretty neat idea overall.
2/5
NOT GOOD
PROS: I'm having trouble finding anything good in this besides the classic song... however it was so random it was funny.
CONS: The flash had absolutely nothing to do with the song. It was all composed of just random pictures! And it ends in the middle of the song returning to the menu with the song still playing.
OVERALL: Overall this was a pretty poor attempt at making a music video. Next time you make one at least make the video correspond with the song playing.
1.5/5
OK MUSIC VID
PROS: It was pretty well synced. The character design is very basic but still unique. Fans of the genre would enjoy this video.
CONS: Lip-syncing however was quite crude. An example of this would be black blobs for the mouth when it opens. Very simple techniques of lip syncing were used. The animation was quite choppy and not smooth at all.
OVERALL: It was an enjoyable music video, and I think people who enjoy this genre of music would like it even more.
3/5
NICE AND VIOLENT
PROS: It has enough violence to please someone looking for action in flash movies. The graphics were decent (I liked the flashing light at the beginning). It was very well paced overall.
CONS: Generic music. A lot of the animation was sloppy. It ending wasn't that spectacular either. It kind of ended abruptly.
OVERALL: Decent flash if someone is in the mood for some senseless violence over animals.
3/5
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