2
Pros: Decent looking characters you have here.
Cons: No sound or voices whatsoever.
No backgrounds in this.
SUGGESTIONS:
Add a background to it.
Add some voices and some music.
2/5
2
Pros: Decent looking characters you have here.
Cons: No sound or voices whatsoever.
No backgrounds in this.
SUGGESTIONS:
Add a background to it.
Add some voices and some music.
2/5
4
Pros: It has some pretty cool looking graphics.
Cons: There isn't any sound in this.
It's pretty short and random.
SUGESTIONS:
Add voice overs and maybe some music, also make it longer.
2/5
Actually, there is sound, just no voices. Yes, it is random. Yes, it is short. The randomness I will keep, the length I will improve in future installments of this series. Thanks for the suggestions.
7
Graphics: Decent graphics, they were pretty detailed.
Animation was really fun to watch too.
Style: The style graphic wise was not original but still nice to look at.
It has a pretty funny concept, but I think it should have been longer.
Sound: It had a good beat and the clock voice added humor to the sound.
Interactivity: It has a pre-loader and a play button.
Humor: It has a funny concept and a pretty funny song too.
Nice job.
4/5
Thanks mayun.
5
Graphics: It could have used more animation to it. The graphics were decent, but I think it needs some more detail.
Style: Art wise it’s pretty interesting to look at, it’s pretty original too. The plot was a little random but you have a good concept.
Sound: It seemed a little muffled and static like, improvement on audio quality is needed.
Interactivity: N/A.
Humor: It has some random humor in it but nothing hilarious.
Decent flash a little too short though.
3/5
4
Well obviously you were high, LOL
Pros: It was pretty decent, and it was good for a quick laugh.
Cons: It was too short, and you graphics need some more detail.
2/5
I thought it sucked...
3
Pros: Your artwork on the pre-loader was nice to look at.
Cons: The file size was way too big.
Hope to see some more from you by your promising art.
2/5
1
Improvements:
Needs a colorful background.
The voice annoyed me, use a different voice, maybe yours.
The pre-loaders were just awful to look at.
The voice seemed off at times too.
1/5
3
Needs improvement.
Improvements:
There was very little movement going on, add some more animation.
Add some more detail to your characters.
Try to fix some of the subtitles, they were off at times.
1/5
lol
That was a pretty funny concept.
Well, it's short, but it was pretty funny.
Most people can't take a joke I guess.
It seems like its missing something but I don't know what.
1/5
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