Rigormort1s's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just Desserts]

Hey thats my voice.

Yup.

Tugoro responds:

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEup

[mario vs. bad guys]

HOW DID YOU DO

HOW DID YOU DO THIS ON MARIO BROS FOR SEGA GENESIS????!!!!!!!

Bean49 responds:

how did you put in so many exclamation and question marks!?

[Fantastic Dance Party]

Best.Movie.Ever.

This is quite possibly the greatest movie of all time. Superb Art work and animation. The voice acting is phenomenal. And the best part is the plot which is super original. Overall better than fallen angel and bitty biken wood COMBINED XD
10/10

[Emi_KILLER---2]

ok

Your not too bad for only 14 years old. You seem to be decent in animating and your animations can be quite smooth at times. The stick figures seem to have creative personalities. You draw stick figures better than most people as well.

There are bad things about this flash, however. Most of the lip syncing in this is off. And for me its hard to hear what they are saying half of the time. The plot was hard to follow at first, but you kind of cleared it up at the end.

Overall I think you need to make some of the voices more clear and understandable. You also need to work on lip syncing. I thought this flash wasn't all that bad, even know I didn't know what the hell was going on at the beginning. Keep practicing, thats all I have to say.

2.5/5

[Battle Royal Game]

decent

I'm not too found of flash's that lack main plot. But this was pretty good. The background was nice looking and the characters weren't drawn half bad either. However adding more detail to the character wouldn't hurt. Also the black outlines were way too thick.

Animation could have been better. It seemed like they were fighting too robotic like and not at a smooth pace. They moved more awkward than smooth.

The sound was OK, but you could have used a different track, to add to the "battle" theme. It was just too techno like for my taste.

I guess some people might find this entertaining, but I for one didn't. I see were you're going with the whole battle thing, but really you should add some plot. For instance, why are they fighting each other?

I would recommend some detailed carnage as well. This was just too time violence wise.

Some improvements would be to add some more detail into the character design, make some of the motions a tad more smooth and not robotic like, get rid of the huge black outlines, there just too distracting. Finally add some more carnage to this, such as blood, guts, weapons, etc.

3/5

[Nightmare Vs. Scythe]

pretty good action flash

[Overview]- You seem to have some neat characters in this flash, even though some are slightly cliché, such as the giant robot. The flash is about two guys called scythe and nightmare. I don't know who's who because they were never introduced specifically. Anyway the fight and eventually the big robot guy is killed and more robot guys come probaly to finish the fight with the skinny guy who I'm guessing is scythe. It ends with the dead robot smiling an evil smile.

[Plot]- No real plot here, just two monster like things fighting. It kind of ends in a way boring way with no real climax.

[Entertainment Value]- If you like fighting things, then good, this is for you.

[Graphics] Nothing really detailed, but they were uniquely drawn with great use of the color red.

[Animation]- This is a category that you might want to improve on. The characters motion were quite choppy and not fluent. Improvement is needed.

[Sound]- Had some nice fighting music, it was very well fit. You could have used some more sound effects like grunts for instance.

[Overall]- Nice action flick. Although it's not perfect it was entertaining to some extent. In you're next flash you might want to add a deeper plot, for instance, why these characters are fighting? In also introduce them to the viewer. You might would also like to add a background like a city of some sort. Improvement on the animation would be a plus too.

2.5/5

~Evan~

[Attack of the ...]

COOL IDEA

PROS: It looks like a funny and original idea. The animation and art was nice and colorful. Music was nice and clear.

CONS: Well it was rather short... maybe you could have shown a clip of animation or two from the movie.

OVERALL: An original idea with some impressive graphics and clear sound.

4/5